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RCS file: /home/cvs/OpenXM/doc/OpenXM-specs/start-session.tex,v
retrieving revision 1.3
retrieving revision 1.4
diff -u -p -r1.3 -r1.4
--- OpenXM/doc/OpenXM-specs/start-session.tex	2000/01/24 02:48:24	1.3
+++ OpenXM/doc/OpenXM-specs/start-session.tex	2000/01/24 12:32:49	1.4
@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-%% $OpenXM: OpenXM/doc/OpenXM-specs/start-session.tex,v 1.2 2000/01/23 00:41:08 noro Exp $
+%% $OpenXM: OpenXM/doc/OpenXM-specs/start-session.tex,v 1.3 2000/01/24 02:48:24 noro Exp $
 //&jp \section{TCP/IP でのセッションのスタート}
 //&eg \section{How to start a session on TCP/IP}
 
@@ -98,7 +98,7 @@ Network byte order しか実装していないシステムでは,
 おおきなボトルネックとなることがあることを了解しておくべきである.
 */
 /*&eg
-A client and a server exchanges one byte data soon after
+A client and a server exchange one byte data soon after
 the communication has started as follows.
 
 \begin{itemize}
@@ -164,12 +164,12 @@ One time パスワードを安全に配送し, リモートマシンの {\
 */
 /*&eg
 \noindent
-Remark: {\tt ox}, included in {\tt OpenXM/src/kxx}, 
+{\tt ox}, included in {\tt OpenXM/src/kxx}, 
 is a launcher to invoke an engine. After invoking an
 engine, it acts as a control server. By default {\tt ox} requires
 a one time password. To skip it, use {\tt -insecure} option.
 A one time password is a null-terminated byte sequence and
-a client informs the both a control server and an engine of
+a client informs both a control server and an engine of
 byte sequences as one time passwords.
 
 {\tt ox} is created from {\tt oxmain.c} and {\tt