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 \section{Design Outline and OpenXM Request for Comments (OpenXM-RFC)} 
 
@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ We want to see how far we can go with this approach.
 
 Motivated with these, we started the OpenXM project with the following
 fundamental architecture, which is currently described in
-OpenXM RFC 100  proposed standard %% ``draft standard'' and ``standard''
+OpenXM-RFC 100  proposed standard %% ``draft standard'' and ``standard''
 ``Design and Implementation of OpenXM client-server model and common
 mathematical object format''.
 \begin{enumerate}
@@ -126,7 +126,8 @@ then the server executes the asir command \\
 (factorize $x^{100}-y^{100}$ over ${\bf Q}$)
 and pushes the result onto the stack.
 \end{enumerate}
-OpenXM package  implements the OpenXM-RFC 100 and 101 based on
+OpenXM package  implements the OpenXM-RFC 100 \cite{ox-rfc-100}
+and 101 \cite{ox-rfc-101} based on
 the above fundamental architecture.
 In this paper, we discuss mainly on systems implementing
 OpenXM-RFC 100 and 101 on TCP/IP.
@@ -144,13 +145,16 @@ systems is taking the ``RFC'' approach, which has been
 used to develop internet protocols.
 We think that ``RFC'' approach is an excellent way and
 we hope that other groups, who are working on standard protocols,
-take this ``RFC'' approach.
+take this ``RFC'' approach, too.
 
 The OpenXM on MPI \cite{MPI} is currently running on Risa/Asir
 as we will see in Section \ref{section:homog}.
-We are now preparing the OpenXM RFC 102 ``Mathematical communication
+We are now preparing the OpenXM-RFC 102 ``Mathematical communication
 on MPI'' (draft protocol)
 based on our experiments on MPI.
+
+In the rest of the paper, we abbreviate
+OpenXM-RFC 100 and 101 to OpenXM if no confusion arises.