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 \section{Design Outline and OpenXM Request For Comments} 
 
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 However, we found that it might be just a dream without realizability
 and that it is an important research subject to
 build a prototype of such an integrated system. % Project X
-We started the OpenXM project with the following
+With these experiences, we started the OpenXM project with the following
 fundamental architecture, which is currently described in
 the OpenXM-RFC 100  proposed standard %% ``draft standard'' and ``standard''
 \cite{ox-rfc-100}.