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 \subsection{Heterogeneous Servers}
 
@@ -13,7 +13,7 @@ We can build a new computer math system by assembling
 different OpenXM servers.
 It is similar to building a toy house by LEGO blocks.
 
-We will see two examples of special purpose systems
+We will see two examples of custom made systems
 built by OpenXM servers.
 
 \subsubsection{Computation of annihilating ideals by kan/sm1 and ox\_asir}
@@ -78,9 +78,9 @@ to teach a course on solving algebraic equations.
 This course was presented with the text book \cite{CLO} which discusses
 on the Gr\"obner basis method and the polyhedral homotopy method
 to solve systems of algebraic equations.
-Risa/asir has a user language like C and we could teach a course
+We could teach a course
 with a unified environment
-controlled by asir user language.
+controlled by asir user language, which is similar to C.
 The following is an asir session to solve algebraic equations by calling
 the PHC pack.
 \begin{verbatim}