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--- OpenXM/doc/issac2000/openxm-clients.tex	2000/01/16 06:39:39	1.7
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@@ -1,4 +1,4 @@
-% $OpenXM: OpenXM/doc/issac2000/openxm-clients.tex,v 1.6 2000/01/16 03:15:49 noro Exp $
+% $OpenXM: OpenXM/doc/issac2000/openxm-clients.tex,v 1.9 2000/01/17 00:48:06 takayama Exp $
 
 \section{OpenXM Clients}    
 
@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@ are provided to execute these primitive operations:
 {\tt ox\_push\_cmd()} for sending an {\tt SM} command to a server
 and {\tt ox\_get()} for receiving data from a stream.
 
-Some operations including the reset operation are realized by
+Some operations including the reset operation are implemented by
 combining these primitives.  Among them, frequently used ones are
-provided as built-in functions. We show several ones.
+provided as built-in functions. We show some of them.
 
 \begin{itemize}
 \item {\tt ox\_pop\_cmo()}
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ the function. It does not wait the termination of the 
 After sending {\tt SM\_control\_reset\_connection} to a control server,
 it completes the operations stated in Section \ref{control}.
 \end{itemize}
-Furthermore {\tt ox\_select()} is provided to detect streams ready for
-reading. It is realized by the {\tt select()} system call and is used
+Furthermore {\tt ox\_select()} is provided to detect if streams are ready for
+reading. It is implemented by the {\tt select()} system call and is used
 to avoid blocking on read operations.
 
 \subsection{Mathematica}
@@ -61,7 +61,7 @@ The module {\tt math2ox} communicates with Mathematica
 with any OpenXM server by the OpenXM protocol.  
 By using the module {\tt math2ox},
 we can call OpenXM servers from Mathematica;
-here is an example of a computation of the de Rham cohomology groups
+here is a demonstration of a computation of the de Rham cohomology groups
 of ${\bf C}^2 \setminus V(x^3-y^2)$ from Mathematica.
 {\footnotesize
 \begin{verbatim}
@@ -74,8 +74,6 @@ Out[4]=  [ 1 , 1 , 0 ]  (* The dimension of 
 \end{verbatim}
 }
 
-\subsubsection{Functions}
-
 The {\tt math2ox} adds the following functions to Mathematica.
 \begin{quote}
 {\tt OxStart[s\_String]} \\
@@ -95,7 +93,9 @@ as {\tt ox\_pop\_cmo()} in Risa/Asir;
 it pops data from the server stack.
 The {\tt OxGet[]} receives an OX data message
 and returns its translation to an local object.
-By using the {\tt OxParse[]} function, one can send OX messages,
+The function {\tt OxParse[]} helps debugging to connect Mathematica
+and ox servers.
+By using the function, one can send OX messages,
 written by the OX expression, to a server. 
 OX expressions are Lisp-like expressions for OX messages and are defined
 in~\cite{noro-takayama}.