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-% $OpenXM: OpenXM/doc/issac2000/openxm-clients.tex,v 1.8 2000/01/16 10:58:19 takayama Exp $
+% $OpenXM: OpenXM/doc/issac2000/openxm-clients.tex,v 1.9 2000/01/17 00:48:06 takayama Exp $
 
 \section{OpenXM Clients}    
 
@@ -28,9 +28,9 @@ are provided to execute these primitive operations:
 {\tt ox\_push\_cmd()} for sending an {\tt SM} command to a server
 and {\tt ox\_get()} for receiving data from a stream.
 
-Some operations including the reset operation are realized by
+Some operations including the reset operation are implemented by
 combining these primitives.  Among them, frequently used ones are
-provided as built-in functions. We show several ones.
+provided as built-in functions. We show some of them.
 
 \begin{itemize}
 \item {\tt ox\_pop\_cmo()}
@@ -49,8 +49,8 @@ the function. It does not wait the termination of the 
 After sending {\tt SM\_control\_reset\_connection} to a control server,
 it completes the operations stated in Section \ref{control}.
 \end{itemize}
-Furthermore {\tt ox\_select()} is provided to detect streams ready for
-reading. It is realized by the {\tt select()} system call and is used
+Furthermore {\tt ox\_select()} is provided to detect if streams are ready for
+reading. It is implemented by the {\tt select()} system call and is used
 to avoid blocking on read operations.
 
 \subsection{Mathematica}