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-\section{OpenXM Development Environment}  (Maekawa)
+\section{OpenXM Development Environment}  
 
-OpenXM package is now developed and maintained by
-a CVS server on the FreeBSD operating system.
-This is an open system to develop softwares.
-Any mathematical programmers are welcome to
+OpenXM package is currently developed and maintained on
+a CVS server.
+The CVS is an open system for a version control.
+Any mathematical programmer is welcome to
 join with the committer team of OpenXM.
 The CVS web is used for reading the source tree and the change logs.
 The cvsup server is used to synchronize the local source tree with
 the main source tree.
-These software tools are widely used to develop free software packages
-like FreeBSD operating system.
-Many mathematical softwares are developed by one programmer
-without using these tools.
-We realized that these tools are very useful and powerful in developement
+These software tools are used to develop free software packages
+like the FreeBSD operating system.
+These tools are very useful in developement
 of the OpenXM mathematical software package by a team.