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-% $OpenXM: OpenXM/doc/issac2000/openxm-stackmachines.tex,v 1.8 2000/01/15 03:46:27 noro Exp $
+% $OpenXM: OpenXM/doc/issac2000/openxm-stackmachines.tex,v 1.13 2000/01/17 08:06:15 noro Exp $
 
 \section{OpenXM Stack machines}\label{sec:ox-stackmachines}
 
@@ -7,13 +7,27 @@ In OpenXM specification, all servers are stack machine
 When a server ox\_xyz gets an OX data message,
 it translates the data into a local object of ox\_xyz
 and pushes the object onto the stack.
-According to the OpenMath specification, 
-the translation scheme together with definitions of mathematical operations
-of the system ox\_xyz is called the {\it PhraseBook} of ox\_xyz.
+The translation scheme 
+%% together with definitions of mathematical operations
+%% of the system ox\_xyz 
+is called the {\it PhraseBook} of ox\_xyz (cf. OpenMath \cite{OpenMath}).
+For example, the Asir command {\tt ox\_push\_cmo(P,1)}
+(push integer $1$ onto the server $P$)
+sends an OX data message
+{\tt (OX\_DATA,(CMO\_ZZ,1))} to the server $P$.
+Here,
+{\tt OX\_DATA} stands for {\tt OX\_DATA} header and 
+{\tt (CMO\_ZZ,1)} is a body standing for $1$ expressed 
+by the CMO.
+The server translates {\tt (CMO\_ZZ, 1)} to its internal object of
+the integer  $1$
+and pushes the object onto the stack.
 
+If the server gets an {\it OX command} message, then the server 
+executes the command.
 Any OX command message starts with the int32 tag OX\_COMMAND.
-The body is an OpenXM stack machine operation code expressed by int32.
-The codes are listed below.
+The body is a stack machine operation code expressed by int32.
+The codes are listed below \cite{noro-takayama}.
 \begin{verbatim}
 #define SM_popSerializedLocalObject               258
 #define SM_popCMO                                 262
@@ -45,7 +59,7 @@ First, arguments for a mathematical operation
 and the number of the arguments are pushed.
 Second, 
 the mathematical operator name, 
-such as {\tt fctr} (asir factorization command),
+such as {\tt fctr} (the factorization command of Asir),
 is pushed as a string.
 Finally, the stack machine command
 {\tt SM\_executeFunction} (269) evaluates the operator and
@@ -53,31 +67,34 @@ pushes the result onto the stack
 after poping the operator name, the number of arguments
 and arguments.
 For example, the following code factorizes $x^{100}-1$ by calling
-{\tt ox\_asir} from asir.
+{\tt ox\_asir} from Asir.
 \begin{verbatim}
 P = ox_launch(); 
 ox_push_cmo(P,x^100-1); ox_push_cmo(P,ntoint32(1));
-ox_push_cmd(P,269); 
+ox_push_cmo(P,"fctr");  ox_push_cmd(P,269); 
 Ans = ox_pop_cmo(P);
 \end{verbatim}
 
 When an error has occurred on an OpenXM server,
-an error object is pushed to the stack instead of a result of the computation.
+an error object is pushed onto the stack 
+instead of a result of the computation.
 The error object consists of the serial number of the OX message
 which caused the error, and an error message.
 \begin{verbatim}
-[341] ox_rpc(0,"fctr",1.2*x)$
-[342] ox_pop_cmo(0);
+[340] P = ox_launch()$
+[341] ox_rpc(P,"fctr",1.2*x)$
+[342] ox_pop_cmo(P);
 error([8,fctr : invalid argument])
 \end{verbatim}
 
 OpenXM server won't send error messages to the client
 except when it receives a {\tt SM\_pop*} command.
-OX stackmachines work in the asynchronous mode which is similar 
+OX stack machines work in the asynchronous mode which is similar 
 to X servers.
-For servers for graphic and sound applications, it is an advantageous feature.
-It is also easy to emulate RPC and a web server for MCP \cite{iamc} 
-on our asynchronous OX stackmachines.
+For servers of graphic and sound applications, 
+it may be an advantageous feature.
+It is also possible to emulate RPC and a web server for MCP \cite{iamc} 
+on our asynchronous OX stack machines.